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Why is it That You Leave? by ~Maynyrd:iconMaynyrd:

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Why is it that you leave?

Late at night my heart weeps,
Begs that you may let me know.
The tears inside fight to be shown,
Fight to be known.
My heart feels the blade,
As you turn away.

Why is it that you leave?

My heart of paper torn,
By your unconcern.
Would you just listen,
Listen to my heart,
As it bleeds out before you,
Bleeds out all I have to say.

Why is it that you leave?

As I sit here writing,
My heart is splitting.
Would you help me,
Help me mend this heart.
I don't need your love,
All I need is to know,

Why is it that you leave?
©2008 ~Maynyrd
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This is something I wrote last night, it's still going through some editing so please refrain from being to critical unless you're being constructive. And yes :iconthenumber19: I know it doesn't have any rhythm.


EDIT: I changed the last verse or whatever it's called.
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~Kimikotsu:iconKimikotsu: Mar 19, 2008, 1:23:19 PM
Dont worry, she'll see one day :manhug:

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"Only the human figure exists; landscape is, and should be, no more than an accessory"
"One should drink little...but often."
~Henri Toulouse-Lautrec
~zerotheconspiracy:iconzerotheconspiracy: Mar 19, 2008, 1:56:15 PM
....I wonder all the time...will I see her again? that is my question......that will turn into a quest, to find...the truth..............the truth is out there...

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...It's a frakkin conspiracy!!!
~thenumber19:iconthenumber19: Mar 19, 2008, 2:10:15 PM
It doesn't have any rhythm.

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They dined on mince, and slices of quince
Which they ate with a runcible spoon;
And hand in hand, on the edge of the sand,
They danced by the light of the moon,
The moon,
The moon,
They danced by the light of the moon.

~ Edward Lear
~Maynyrd:iconMaynyrd: Mar 19, 2008, 2:25:05 PM
In the words of the turtle, "You suck."

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"Never gonna give you up
Never gonna let you down
Never gonna run around and desert you
Never gonna make you cry
Never gonna say goodbye
Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you"
You've been Rick-rolled
~thenumber19:iconthenumber19: Mar 19, 2008, 3:13:05 PM
Now that has rhythm.

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They dined on mince, and slices of quince
Which they ate with a runcible spoon;
And hand in hand, on the edge of the sand,
They danced by the light of the moon,
The moon,
The moon,
They danced by the light of the moon.

~ Edward Lear
*SonoHTora:iconSonoHTora: Mar 19, 2008, 6:03:13 PM
stop writing angst y poety and ask her out already

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i want suzaku dead like seriously f**king dead
~ParanoidMan:iconParanoidMan: Mar 20, 2008, 11:06:53 AM
:iconturtlewrathplz:

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I Laugh at Life: its antics make for me a giddy game,
Where only foolish fellows take themselves with solemn aim.
~ Robert Service
~Maynyrd:iconMaynyrd: Apr 22, 2008, 5:01:55 PM
You need to fix that link in your sig.

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"Never gonna give you up
Never gonna let you down
Never gonna run around and desert you
Never gonna make you cry
Never gonna say goodbye
Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you"
You've been Rick-rolled
*SonoHTora:iconSonoHTora: Apr 22, 2008, 5:54:48 PM
really

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i want suzaku dead like seriously f**king dead
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